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Hungry Eyes

walking in you allow your
robe to fall to the floor
You are a beautiful sight
as candle light flickers
Catching your Porcelain skin
Oh, how you glow
My eyes burn with an amber flame
As I watch you undress
Catching a glimpse of
your ample breasts
Hypnotized, your sweet aroma
heightens my senses
The way you tease and tantalise
Arouses my desire to savour
Your sweet kisses,
Evoking images, how I fantasise
You are food for my
Hungry Eyes

I am obliged
Faded into the darkness that surrounds me
I configure memories
as you are watching
the key that unlocks the doors of my mind
I can feel your sensuality
in time I surrender
only to you
tantilizing moments I await
for your lilac touch across my caramel skin
glazed from sweat
my passion is fulfilled
as you bring closure to my inner feelings
overflow of Erotic madness
as you feel me tenderly
with a kiss
that softly intrudes my lips
my flesh has taken control
as we embrace
with traces of my lipstick
lost in the abyss
high ectasty
and all I see is you
in my Hungry Eyes

Embracing you, the softness of your kiss
ignites my inner flame
Caressing I follow the outline of your curves
As satin trails glisten
leaving a lustrous sheen
Closing your eyes
I Lay you down on a bed of roses
Moulding into my hands I follow
the contours of your thighs
Releasing a breathless sigh
I pull you closer
Beads of moisture sate your skin
As the antisipation of our love unfurls
The warmth of your skin against mine
Sends a breeze of pleasure rushing deep inside
Easing myself between your thighs
Our bodies hot, passions rise
Caressing you from deep inside
Yeilding myself to you
How you satisfy my Hungry Eyes

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  • twodie4
    June 25

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    oh wow, this is just beautiful. I didn't realise two people ahd wrote it till I got to the end and saw your an. Beautiful erotic that leaves the senses reeling for more. BRAVO!
    td4


    • Ephiphany
      June 25
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      Wow

      thanks I had forgotten about this one thanks again
      -e

  • Blaque01
    August 31, 2007
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    Gurl u are hot..


    • Ephiphany
      August 31, 2007
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      thanks my friend

      I appreciate you more than u know.
      E

      Hey, holla at me, ok

  • Marctheman
    August 30, 2007

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    this is a great piece sister, great collaboration with Onesugar, this piece just keep the reader guessing, as a man reading it, i can only imagine two women making love, that's a beautiful thing, lol.

    great piece
    love it.


    • Ephiphany
      August 30, 2007
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      thank you Marc. You are always so kind with your comments. Much luv,
      Diva

  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    August 30, 2007

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    Stunning Writing

    Stunning beautiful writing here. The imagery and the romantic nature of this brings the piece to life. This is overflowing with the anticipation of what is to come. Love is deep indeed. Wonderful collaboration.

    Well done
    Wayne
    xxx

  • Arzab
    August 29, 2007

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    Great collaboration. This is a beautiful write. Beautiful imagery and very passionate. Keep up the great work.


    • Ephiphany
      August 29, 2007
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      Thanks Arzab....

      I really appreciate your comments, very much. Keeps me inspired

      Ephiphany

  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    August 29, 2007
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    lovely and so sensual, great collab you two.

    Tasha


    • Ephiphany
      August 29, 2007
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      Thank you sis

      and thanks for the Beautiful graphic as well. You know I love the glittery stuff. You are one of a kind.

      Piff

  • onesugar silver member
    August 29, 2007
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    Piff love the pic
    just brill
    sugar
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