We were curious with
insensible comfort
-in my arms, I held
your spirit as my own and
drank you to completeness
consuming you in whole...
I bought you a poster
yesterday, at the sale
-black/white, w/shades
of gray and Paris
-your favorite city
next is Dallas...
We sat by Veda Pond, stirring
melted ice-cream, eating
love talk and dim smiles on
the wooden park bench, cloaked
in soft shadows, soothed
by mild moonlight...
"Do something spontaneous!"
you burst, peering crazy
blue eyes deep into
my fragile soul
-I picked you up, spun you ‘round
and laid you down:
Author notes
By Jordon Shinn, for Kelli Stanton.
08/29/07
...what did you see?
Comments
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I saw love as it truly is. Something beyond passion...
Kinda felt it as well. Reading your comments on my previous work you probably already know what I'm talking about. Simple just the joy of loving.
-Take care and have a good one!
Blanche -
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...on your comment...we aren't dating. she broke my heart...or was it I?...
-Pap.
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