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ice cream dream

Peanut butter chocolate banana swirl
go on, try some, give it a whirl.

It's a new flavor of Icecream I did just made
taste a spoonfull and feel your tongue quake.

So yummy and cold, delicious and creamy
like eating a banana split, isn't it dreamy?

Have another bite, or two or three
when you've gobbeled it all up don't forget to thank me.

It was all my idea, so an ice cream maker I did buy
and put those flavors together, to give it a try.

Peanut butter, chocolate and banana too
try my ice cream, that is home made and new.

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  • Play Pretend.
    March 25, 2008
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    haha,
    what a whimsical delicious poem!
    good job!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 28, 2007

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    Now look what you gon e and done

    Now I have to go build me a rootbeer float right here at lunch time . I think I will sufer through it ha


  • bar room stool
    October 10, 2007
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    i love it!

  • PoetryPuppy
    August 29, 2007
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    Thank you for your yummy poem, love Kiarna


  • goneforaseason
    August 29, 2007

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    I think this is so funny and cute...awwwww. I like it and I might even try that flavor if you ever gave me some. Very uplifting and light poem. I really enjoyed it.

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