Cinderella was followed
Chased in pale moon beams
Within revealing daylight
Found by claiming dreams
For walks in sultry moonlight
They may look my way
In sharp light of the morning
No one is to stay
As my face raises a moon
To absent sun's heat
At night I'm fleeting luster
Condemned to retreat
Cross the sky in cool dark air
Run home at midnight
Moon beams shimmer through teared eyes
Ruthless comes daylight
Despond this mornings mirror
A moment wallowed
I see Cinderella's life
If no one ever followed
Please tell me what you think
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This one makes you think a little about what course one's like COULD have taken under different circumstances. Cinderella was and is a fairy tale. Real life would not follow the same course. Sometimes fairytales are better, eh? Very thoughtfully penned.
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I've really enjoy the interesting comments this one gets. The theme I was aiming at is, love chased Cinderella but the author continuously runs home in the night from life's masqerade.
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Good but slightly emigmatic. I do like it though
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well i think it flows smoothly but i dont really unde5rstand what ur trying to say..but poetry is for the writer so if ur happy with it keep it the way u wrote it thats what i do..
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