Chains of cold silver
bind the six-headed Hydra
an unbreakable magic
ensnared by the trap
great Hydra is now so weak
the beast deserves to be slain
Author notes
Sedoka is an unrhymed form of poem. It is composed of two three-line katauta, each with a syllable count of 5-7-7.A sedoka may address one subject, using differing perspectives.
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Very well written. It caused to go find out what a Hydra was. Thank you for sharing this piece.
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Elf Forest Challenge
Wonderful and powerful magic you have penned with this Sedoka. You are a powerful and loyal warrior. Next time I ask that you tell what form it is in your notes so others can learn from you.
Love,
Princess Amera
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Oh I am invisioning a large water monster. LOL
I dont know what a hydra is but I definately got a
a great image.
Great short piece little brother.
delila
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