It may be of no surprise how my heart is aching
each breath I take is another second of moving on
My mind plays tricks on me and I start shaking
Its her voice in a sweet little song
I die away from her every passing night
Leaving me motionless and cold hearted
My dreams are occupied by this small gleam of light
but my love seems to have already started...
to stop...
That love I had was true
It was strong ang ruthless and left me wide open for an attack
Now I am left feeling so blue
Damn....if i could just go back
I cant stop thinking about you
my heart burns like acid drops dropping onto it
And how dare you!
how dare you drop my only heart and smash it into pieces that cannot fit!
I cry every night over your insolent self
I mourn because I cant stand the fact that I fell in love
You made me feel in a way I've never felt
But, here I am...in this cursed home in which I was robbed...
Away from happiness
Yet a gentle breeze swing about
I see that it will all pay off soon
I may cry every night and you may hear my shout
but,alone I will howl at the moon
Don't worry baby...
Next time you see me you will notice I will be better
I won't be so shady
And I will be able to reject your letters
You play with love...
Love is not a toy
If you speak to the one above
You will see that I am no longer a little boy
Author notes
it's personal and extremely hurtful so please dont ask for details...
Honestly...what feeling did this give you?
Comments
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I really liked how you wrote this because it's things like love, and heart breaks that most people have a problem with writing. It's just hard to write something about it. I think this piece is awesome and hope to see more of your writing. Good luck, and I hope you feel better and get stronger!
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wow...this is full of emotional pain, and even though I've been through something similar....I could never pen it down as beautifully as this...your poem actually made me cry and it takes a lot t omake tears swell in my eyes, this is a beautifl and heart breaking verse...she must have been a very special girl. Don't give up on hope, you're still young and young lovers reunite....always.
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Gregg,
I hate that your parents are the way they are and they
take you away from your happiness and I am still in love
with you and I think about you every single solitary day.
No one understood me like you did and no one ever will. I
wish you knew how I felt about everything. Love is not a
toy your right about that. I still can not get you out of
my head no matter what. I look at your myspace constintally.
Well that was a breathtaking poem and I loved it. It
touched me. I still am in love with you and when I think
about you it hurts really bad you have no idea....
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I love the raw honesty of emotion you write in this piece. I can relate to having my heart broken into a million piece, it's a very painful experience. Unfortunately there are those who play with love and people's hearts like they were toys. Thank you for sharing this.
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