With tears in my eyes, folding my hands
I pray to You, my beloved God,
No weakness should come to me,
Nor I can ever oppress anybody.
Let whole of my heart and soul
Be at Your service,
For all the poor and underprivileged
Suffering from disease and distress.
Let me appear in the rising sun
With hope for those who never aspired,
Let me be the sprinkle of nectar
To cheer hearts suffered in the ruthless world.
Make me toil to bring smile
For those who have never dreamt,
Let me be able to tie the thread
Of love making all forget to hate.
I like to be tears of love of those souls
Who can only love, but not to hurt,
I bow down to Your feet, my Lord
For getting the ever lasting love and peace.
***
Author notes
Option 4. Tears
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This violates the run with me stipule and also the not being in other contests. I hate religion, thanks for taking the time to enter though.
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this is sad yet full of hope to get away from those tears, great write! goodluck ;-) x
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nicely done
a wonderful prayer. I like it. Simple but then a prayer doesn't have to be complicated at all. All you need do is open your heart up to Him. Thanks for sharing this with us. And thanks for placing this into my contest. -
i can deff see how the picture brought up the idea of the lord our god
great write -
"Make me toil to bring smile
For those who have never dreamt,"
Beautiful.
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thank you for entering this powerful poem into my contest. Unfortunatly it doesen't fit in with the theme of the contest so it can not be considered for the final judging.
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I love this because of the unselfishness written here.
Very good job. Shancy.
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This is a wonderful inspiring write thank you for entering i wish you the best of luck with it.
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excellent
This is definitely something Ellie will enjoy. She focuses a lot on poor people and stuff so I know this will delighten her heart. Thanks for entering.
Good luck.
Brian -
Magnificent!
I love this poem! It is really good! I just loved this portion of it:
"Let me appear in the rising sun
With hope for those who never aspired,
Let me be the sprinkle of nectar
To cheer hearts suffered in the ruthless world.
Make me toil to bring smile
For those who have never dreamt,
Let me be able to tie the thread
Of love making all forget to hate."
Great super awesome fantastic job!
Luv ya oodles!
Courtney
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Beautiful
This is a prayer that touches the soul and brings joy to my heart to read.The giving of oneself to be used of God so willingly...blessed are we that know and trust him in all we do...Pray for my sister a healing...
Thank you very much for blessing me with this wonderful prayer...
Blessing
~Cheryl~
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a prayer for God to use you to do His will. Now that is a prayer. God be with you.
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beautifully written! i enjoyed it very much! good luck!
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Good poem. This is not exactly what I was looking for but a good poem all the same. Thank you for entering!
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This is a very nice prayer. Very lovely indeed. Thank you for entering my contest. I wish you the best of luck.
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such a beautiful prayer. Absolutly Beautiful. the heart that comes to the Lord to pray not for oneself, but to request in humility to be of aid to the world in need. so lovely
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