Yippity dippity weee......
Darkness lies in fullness,
Yet empty as the night.
He stands behind the bedroom door,
As the nurse enters my room once more,
"Who is there?" I hear her cry,
"The cat nurse, the dear old puss."
He comes as her voice leaves us again,
Smiling like a dog on heat,
He creeps closer,
Pushing me upon the bed.
The whips are out,
The chains are on,
"What are you doing in there?" calls my mother,
"Fixing the drain pipe."
His tools are out,
My cherry almost popped,
The door bursts open,
"What are you doing in here?" shouts my father.
"Nothing?"
A contest entry
- Darken Us Up with Your Comedic Genius and Romantic Attitude by So Strange.
1000 points, ended September 7, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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ok i am having to do this through your comment. but i need to find out what you meant when you wrote this poem? like is it meant to be somewhat dark, or what? please let me know so i can judge fairly.
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I enjoyed this because the scene where the the girl and guy were making out on the bed, that was funny because the way you described it.
Actually, this entire poem was humorous and I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
Good luck in my contest! -
great poem. it is very...different. good luck in the contest.
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