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Bubble Fun

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The candles placed around the bath, a soft and sensual light,

water warm, bubbles deep, began a passionate night.

 

Champagne poured, clothes removed, he helped her to step in

they kissed and giggled softly, their faces wore a grin.

 

She slipped into the bubbles, her feet he gently washed.

he sucked each precious toe, all inhibitions quashed.

 

She squirmed, his mouth inviting, his tongue licked everyone,

her soles he bit and teased, she felt the urge to cum.

 

They sipped champagne and kissed as the bubbles did subside,

he kissed her creamy breasts, her thighs she opened wide.

 

He turned and lay between them, his head upon her breast,

her feet she curled around his cock, between them it was pressed.

 

He moaned beneath her magic soles jerking up and down,

she held him as his cum shot out covering his crown.

 

He bent and sucked each toe in turn removing all his cream,

rammed his fingers in her, she let out a stifled scream.

 

He pulled the plug, the water drained, her legs at shoulder height,

they fucked each other hard and hot, in the bath tub Friday night.

 

As she came a hot sweet stream of cum and pee exploded,

he drank his fill, licked her clean, but he was overloaded.

 

She sucked his cock, hard and firm, taking all she could,

to her delight he came again, knowing that he would.

 

now both cold, soft towels were wrapped around their bodies tight,

as on their bed of passion, they loved into the night.

 

 

 

 

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  • Tarja
    January 3, 2008

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    Congrats on the honorable mention trophy. This was fantastic! It was so elegant and ... well a very different approach on the contest which I like! Thank you for entering and good luck!


  • love my jose luis
    November 28, 2007

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    This was not only erotic, but it was tastefully done and I liked that, I really think that you showed a lot of talent when you wrote this piece. Great job!!!
    ~Alix


  • ceegeeess
    September 26, 2007
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    Into the Heaven of ecstacy!

    very picturesque and the narration takes the reader alongwith! Nice write


  • Riftkin gold member
    September 6, 2007
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    this is great and I love the flow of your words, the rhyme was great too.

    Riftkin


  • Justinez
    September 3, 2007

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    Absolutely awesome!

    Woohoo! I loved this write - so erotic yet sensual and romantic - Good luck with the contest, not that you'll need it


  • arafura gold member
    August 29, 2007

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    explosions...

    You are getting very good at these erotic verses my friend! You leave the reader wanting more... and more! I think you just burned a hole through my monitor!
    Good luck in the contest!


  • onesugar gold member
    August 29, 2007
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    Wonderful
    left the reader feeling like they had been there
    Good Luck
    sugar


  • Swtpoetryman
    August 29, 2007

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    FUCK, THIS HIT THE SPOT & MADE ME VERY HARD, INDEED!

    This was one helluva Birthday Gift - to say the least - made even sweeter by the fact that it has been a very, very hard day, indeed - BUT not in the way that I would have liked it to be - until now! Damn, Baby this naughty boy is VERY HARD and just had to stroke his cock for you! Have we met before? And who told you that I like licking and sucking toes and feet and having my meat JERKED OFF by them to - as well as cleaning up all of my creamy cum after!!!
    GOOD LUCK in the contest and Thanks SO MUCH for entering another contest that will be VERY HARD to judge, indeed BUT someone has to do it and I think that I am up to the job (pun intended)! He! He!
    For now I'm DELIGHTED to send you three horny fellows who promise to clean up their mess with lips and tongues if you'd give them a delicious FOOT JOB, too!
    Peace & Love to you!
    Earl.

  • Tercarro
    August 29, 2007

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    Hot stories

    This is a hot story which made me want to take a bath and blow those bubbles away.
    Nice and erotic, well done.
    Terry


  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    August 29, 2007

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    Mind Blowing

    Awesome


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    August 29, 2007

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    holy moly,, you women 'are' worse than us men, talk about getting down and jiggy with it,,, woohoo!!! you go girl,, hard present to follow, what jeeves..


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    August 29, 2007

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    STUNNING AND WONDERFUL

    STUNNING WRITING HERE. AMAZING IMAGERY! THIS WAS HOT WTTH A CAPITAL 'H.' BRILLIANTLY-WRITTEN. THE IMAGERY JUST PUTS YOU RIGHT THERE. THE FLOW IS SUPERB AND THE ATMOSPHERE IS ELECTRIC. A TRUE ELECTRIC CHARGE OF SEXUAL HEAT. I LOVED IT. WONDERFUL SUE.

    WAYNE
    xxx

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