You are
Beautiful in every way
Like cloudless days in
month of may
You have
Eyes like the night sky
They dance with the stars
that make you cry
You have
a heart of wonderous love
and peace within
pure white as dove
You are
Blessed with the mind
of an angel dear
Be mine this night
And hold me near
anaisnais (C)
Author notes
Eyes like the night sky most inspiring. Written with love/card verse in mind.
A contest entry
- the heartbreakers by spine.
700 points, ended September 20, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Just Me...And You... by FlipperSwitch.
600 points, ended September 8, 2007, 18 entries
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Thank you for your review/kind comments. Much obliged.
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Beautiful and it holds an unforced natural feel to it- excellent job.
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very cute and settle. A lovely sentiment peice very relaxed with a tone of a whisper...
I findthis somewhere in nature with all of her beauty
Short and simple but elaborate -
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Thank you kindly for your review/kind comments. Most humbled.
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ah.... very nice descriptions here my friend.
I really like the last two lines. They are so lovely to read! bravo!!!
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best of luck in the contest
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Aww! How very sweet. Tis a lovely poem my dear. I like the rhyme scheme
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This is really a nice wrtie.Goodluck in the contest.Best wishes.
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