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my favourite things

the clock that strikes midnight
the dark after day
that one final moment of wake before sleep
these are a few of my favourite things

when my mind breaks!
when the sheild falls!
when im at the edge!
i simply remember my favourite things
and then i dont feel....So mad

leather and latex
a sharp biting pain
steel on my skin and
the sting of cold rain
these are a few of my favourite things

when the dream ends!
when i wake up!
when its too much to bear!
i simply remember my favourite things
and then i can start....again

just an idea,i hate it

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  • Peaches018
    September 13, 2007
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    Good

    This one was good i like how you did it to the song!!
    I was singing along


  • suicidal-revenge
    August 30, 2007
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    this is good
    keep writing!!! ^_^

  • try-look-into-me-now
    August 29, 2007
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    argh


  • Lady Australis silver member
    August 29, 2007
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    i dont hate it
    its good kitty well done
    lov ya

  • marshmellow goth
    August 29, 2007
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    Ohh... Needs to be more depressing Nah, it's good, I like it. YAY

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