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Mera greater (Isla Tres trilogy, Pt II)

Mera greater,
Kratos twin.
A beautiful land,
full of pleasures sin.

Kratos twin,
yet totally different.
The same from afar,
but towards pleasure bent.

A beautiful land,
never marred by death.
Beautiful Faeries,
with aphrodite's breath.

Full of pleasures sin,
love is a passing thought.
Happy indulgences of life,
only pleasure sought.

Mera greater,
Kratos twin.
A beautiful land,
full of pleasures sin.

Author notes

Part two of Isla Tres http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3352618#
Kratos minor http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3352690,
Delia mighty http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3352853.

Dedicated to the beautiful Amera

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  • I n v i s i b l e
    March 17, 2008

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    This was great as well; i liked it a bit more. One thing, I thought pleasure was used a bit too much, like in "only pleasure sought.". but other than that, great write!


  • Merry Christmas
    August 31, 2007

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    I want to go to this place!!! Please say it really exists. Mesa still loves the style of this.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    August 29, 2007
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    This is an amazing write much talent you have very nice images thank you for sharing. Best wishes.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    August 29, 2007

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    Ok I take that back I want to go here.
    LOL this place sounds super fun.


    Delila