Kratos minor,
least of the great.
Ever so fearsome,
it's hunger to sate.
Least of the great,
yet feared most of all,
None may escape
it's fiery halls.
Ever so fearsome,
it devoures the flesh.
Dark creatures lurking,
all fears to refresh.
It's hunger to sate,
all it consumes.
Never satisfied,
it's feared shadow looms.
Kratos minor,
least of the great.
Ever so fearsome,
its hunger to sate.
Author notes
Part one of Isla Tres http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3352618#
Mera greater http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3352828,
Delia mighty http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3352853.
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As mentioned before, I really like how you start with a line from the previous stanza. I see it as the thread tying the poem together xp You had some god lines. Just one thing that keeps bothering me : "it's fiery halls"
It seems a bit out of rhythm and a bit out of place: i get teh whole refernce to fantasy nad halls--> castles, but it doesnt seem to fit with describing the "beast". Just a small thing. -
I love the way that you continue thi on. (Ie. using the lines of the first stanza {is that what it's called} [I only studies poetry in Afrikaans, so..... *hangs head in shame horribly confused*] Good poem.
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This is a very good write.You are talented keep writing thank you for sharing. Best wishes xxxx
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Oh I like this one.
The little guys are always the ones to fear.
So creative you are. WoW I am enjoying these this morning. Couldnt ask for a more talented little brother.
Delila
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Oh my, the journy continues and now the adventure takes me to a place of danger. Perhaps you will protect me?
Love,
Amera♥
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wonderful rhyme sceam. pen on, poet. You write very good to be so young. Keep up the great work.
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