Beautiful sunsets,
far off shores.
Magical dreams
of having more.
Fantasy adventure,
in forests of trees.
Dangerous fun
on the islands three.
Kratos minor,
least of the great.
Ever so fearsome,
its hunger to sate.
Mera greater,
Kratos twin.
A beautiful land,
full of pleasures sin.
Delia mighty,
Greatest of the three.
An incredible place,
many wonders to see.
So many desires,
So much to do.
So many legends,
Let's see if they're true.
Author notes
Please read the Isla Tres trilogy:
Kratos minor http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3352690,
Mera greater http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3352828,
Delia mighty http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3352853.
good comments (criticism is welcome) will be rewarded, to a point.
A contest entry
- Delightful Nighty Night Contest by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended August 30, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn that silver into gold pt 5 by whispernthedark.
300 points, ended March 6, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very beautifully penned......
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Very well written, great poem. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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OOOh congrats
Wow i never read any poem as interesting as this lol...nice title for this poem as well *claps* u should enter MY contest before it is too late..wait let me check the date of my contest and if it still open i really would like to see one of your poems entered for my contest maybe even something NEW yay!!!
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Mesa loves it. I really do. I wish I could write as well as you and you did it in ryhme too. Bravo *claps*
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Love the hot look of your background for this poem. What a whirlwind trip around the islands. Good job on your work and good luck in the contest!
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Goodness, What a treasured piece and a Trilogy!!
I am glad I could provide this inspiration for you.
This was so imaginative You have done a wonderful job.
delila
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this is really cool you discribe frears really well
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great rhyming!
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I enjoyed this write, it’s a wonderful quatrain and the abcb rhyme structure makes it not only a fast but a smooth read. The image is delightful as it took me on a trip to a far off island. Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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I love the rhyme sceam. It seemed to flow very well. Pen on, poet...
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