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[ Peace is broken under the pale moonlight. ]

Peace is broken under the pale moonlight.
And everything i knew, found out it wasnt right.
Fifty or so have been taken.
Eleven or so remain.
Love is what im making.
Only to leave nothing but a stain.
My hearts on fire.
And my minds a blaze.
Im giving you all your desire.
And its you that I amaze.
Thinking so much about this moment.
I thought it wouldnt come.
Ive spent a year in tourment.
And yet I feel numb.
This isn't what I expected.
Your more than I ever knew.
My feelings again rejected.
I belong to you.
Blind my eyes.
Forget my name.
Everthing you realize.
You feel so ashamed.
that you did this.
and most of all it was with me.
at the moment it was too good to resist.
and there's no more hope that this will ever be.

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