i have a recurrent dream
of paper flowers
where snipplets of you
border on breathless
photographs prolong
her temple of art
as seconds become years
i live for the folds
in time
and yield nothing...
but the delicate cuts
Author notes
MuddyKing
A contest entry
- Pimp up my love poetry by leander.
700 points, ended February 22, 2008, 31 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This one has such a soothing voice to it. I absolutely like what you have written here
great imagery, and the alliteration is a wonderful touch of detail
Thanks for entering this contest, I wish you the best of luck
Leander -
Beautiful one, Mud.
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You really are
so very talented. This
is fabulous, and I love
your style.
Love, Lane
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This is beautiful. The delicate cuts, the soft paper - truly well done, but it is written by you and I don't expect anything less. Delicate and fine. Excellent.
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oh, my goodness... what a write...this is a new favorite of yours for me...
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oh
this twists my heart..
it is like china, delicate.
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" photographs prolong
her temple of art"
I loved the whole delicateness of this poem, but that line especially.
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Never mind about Melissa lol. I loved it lol,
This was very soft in thought, The imagery of feelings
is breathless within this one,
As always Thank you for being you.
Love and Light
Frozentearz
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"i live for the folds
in time
and yield nothing...
but the delicate cuts"
Sighhh...Exquisite, my Friend. Melissa will love it, Sweetie. Good luck in her contest, Scribe...G'night...
Wanderer
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