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Wise Men

~*~
Wise men say....

Such a line, such a line!

To say or not to say,
Shall I trip or step in time?

~*~
Wise men do...

Such a dream, such a dream!

Do I tell you how I feel
Or leave my heart to scream?

~*~
Wise men see...

Such a wish, such a wish!

Do I dare open up your eyes
Or stay blind in calming bliss?

~*~
Wise men hear...

Such a song, such a song!

Do you hear my heartstring's notes
Or were they silent all along?

~*~
Wise men know...

Such a hope, such a hope!

Do you know what you do to me
Or do I simply lurch and grope?

~*~
Wise men see...

Such a wish, such a wish!

Do I dare open up your eyes
Or stay blind in calming bliss?

~*~
Wise men show...

Such a lie, such a lie!

For I cannot read your silent stare
Though believe me, I do try!

~*~
Wise men say...

Such a line, such a line!

Do I say my heart or not...
      Shall I trip or step in time?

Author notes

Sometimes people seem to have such a difficult time just saying how they feel... why is it so confusing?
Why must we fight within ourselves to decide what should be said and what best is left unsaid?

Please tell me what you think!

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  • vici377
    October 2, 2007

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    wow

    You hit it with this one.. absolutely love it..your rhythm and flow were excellent..and it speaks volumes..excellent write..


  • Arrianna MacEwan
    September 16, 2007

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    I ust say whats on my mind lol. it often gets me into mischief, but I'm heard, (or ignored)

    lovely write dear poet


  • azlyn gold member
    September 1, 2007

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    Why indeed? Lovely words of honesty and certain truth my Sister! Beautiful words and feelings! You have touched my heart once more in such a delicate way! Thank you my dear!
    Love and Much Peace~
    Az