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not the negative

as i sit here trying to think
all that is going thew my head is how much i miss "home"
all i ever talked about was leaveing
but now that im gone
i just wonder if anyone cares
if anyone notices
all i wanted was a good stable position in life
now i have it and all i want is the randomness back
i want the drugs back
but i know it wont do me any good to have them
it wont even do me any good to be back
i just have to buck up and learn to be a man
all my friend have and there yunger than me
i need to start up the good side of life
i need to stop thinking about all the bad
i need to focus on the good
i need to focus on the good
just the good
not the negative

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just me siting and tinking

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  • crimson rose avarus
    April 16, 2008

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    yes you should focus on the good not the bad because when people start thinking about the bad they dont' start thinking clearly and well thoughts of suicide and other things could happen. i know you well enough that this type of thing happens anyway...i know that joe misses you he talks about you all the time well not all the time but every once in a while so that means that he's still thinking about you john wonders why you don't call much and well mark...he's just mark.


  • Osiris Ra
    September 5, 2007

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    Very good stuff, Tim. It's been a while since I've seen you write, but it's great to know you haven't disappeared off the face of the Earth.


  • plzdiefasterlove
    September 2, 2007
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    Wow...It wasn't too long ago that I was reciting the same thing in my head. I really like this piece you've choose to write. I cant all explain why I like and to me I think it makes it more special because the reasons are hidden. Thanks for penning.

    Much Love,
    PlZdieFasterLove