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[ To a kindom of light and not of dark ]

To a kindom of light and not of dark
Where the gold shimmers from the warters
To a kindom of darkness where the moon light gloos bright

I am here to stay in the middle torn between bolth
The light and the dark
Bolth so warm
Bolth home, but I face the fact that I can not chose betwwen them
It's not fate but something more
Something more

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  • dustookie2
    August 30, 2007

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    As i was reading i was thinking dark but you balance it with the light and you know i like that place where i can walk in the dark and enjoy it but know that i can walk in light and not be drawn down into the abyss. nice one hun good flow and the lines just eased off the page with the imagery and emotional description....sorry i have not been as attentive yep the bitch is back