King Arthur and his knights
Around the round table
Planned for their future fights
King Arthur and his knights
Strived to make their world right
Brave they were and able
King Arthur and his knights
Around the round table.
Author notes
Option 4.King Arthur.
Written September 18th, 2003
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1000 points, ended March 11, 2007, 14 entries
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kool
Kool poem =) ,it is short , sweet and interesting , you have a unique style of writing , nice use of imegery .thanks for entering my contest .
wonderful k
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A very nice triolet, very well formed.
Thanks for your entries
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Nice little triolet. It made me think of a song the knights might sing when they went out on a quest.
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thank you for sharing this well written poem with me tonight and i wish you well in this contest that you have entered. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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Thank you for entering FORMS CONTEST + OPTIONS
lmf -
Thank you for entering THE FORMS CONTEST + OPTIONS
Good luck!
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short but sweet and very good,thank you much!!!
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Very good imagery. I could almost see them around the table. I'm worried that its a bit more descriptive than narrative but thank you for entering my contest. Its an excellent poem and fits in every aspect of what I asked for. Thank you again
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Knew I would catch up with you somewhere. Lost your link.
Short but oh so sweet... around the round is circles of mateship !!!
Wish you well in the contest I dared to enter with no knowledge of bardic poetry Aaaagh.
Linda
for you...keep whistling your words....
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Simple and Direct. Good luck.
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One of my favourite stories. King Arthur. Although it hasn't been proved that he truly existed, a part of me hopes the myth holds truth so I'll give you the benefit of the doubt. I enjoy the form of the Triolet; I've never used it before but I like it. Perfect flow and meter, and the rhymes worked smoothly. Particularly enjoyed the line "Brave they were and able" Perfect sentence inversion. It sounded quite Old English-esque. Cheerio!
SaM
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This flowed like a story was that the idea of a triolet? Good piece Gramps hugs,Sherry zzzzzz;)
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Bravo!
This is just fabulous. What a great picture this gives. What a cool type of poem, this Triolet is, I will have to investigate. You have produced another fine work of art Sir. Thank you for this experience!
USpace
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Great!
You writes always take me on a colorful, picturesque journey through time, and history, and I love it, yesterday Ceasar, today King Arthur, tomorrow... Great!
Much Love,
Renee
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