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Keep It Out

Don't tell me it
I'm not interested
I've gone through hell
ripped up the fairy tale
ending you promised me

sing me a song
another somber affair
click your fingers
tap your toes
you're still out of tune
with me

Can you touch me?
I've only just learnt to fly
Can I grasp the tree tops
without the inevitable
fall from grace
into your grasp

I'm ready
Clarity Halleyuya!
I'm ready for these tears
the safety blanket
is yours to take
this curse is yours to bear

You can drag me
kicking screaming
I will find a way
my dreams will happen
I won't abandon
the only happiness I ever had

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  • squirrelmick
    September 4, 2007
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    Great

    Wow, this is really powerful. There are some great images in it, ad some brilliantly worded lines - I especially liked "You're still out of tune with me" and "The safety blanket is yours to take". What an excellent piece of writing full of emotion, well done. Keep it up.