Proof of love's sweet creed
beauty exists in you true
to destroy all bitter despair
the dawning of dreams anew
Never have I known truth
in longings so tender
resurrecting two heartbeats
the sweetest of surrender
Visions broaden in serenity
with anticipations to fulfill
divine providence gathered soft
from each caress and every thrill
This hunger for you beckons
dancing upon the hem of fate
cradled by thoughts in Forever
as destiny glides on blissful wait
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Stanzas 1, 3 - markgrif
Stanzas 2, 4 - PerfectImperfection
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perfect perceptions in sync. Beautiful poetry also.
Best wishes in the contest.
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I imagine over time (years I pray) the two of you will write beautiful poetry, and history, together. I will remember this as the start to a tale that rivals Romeo and Juliet's. Bravo to you both.
Blessed be,
Billie Jean
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i will be adding names to finalist lists as they are completed does not mean your in the running justthat we are separating complated work and work in progress
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Very 'emotion' filled
A beautiful piece, even if it cause gag reflects LOL just kidding, you two did a beautiful piece!!
[Hope to see more].
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Oh my I am sooooo Impressed with the two of you
I like this collab a lot Well done and good luck in the contest.
delila
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First off, for Wendys first collab this was awesome.
I am impressed you tw
<---see im smiling
Please put your name in the title as well, this write should be listed under womens and mens identical..should be amatching pair. I know work but it will be easier to distinguish the collab partners and award points to the winners.
Thanks and best of luck *jumps up and down*
Scott and Tory
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Gosh guys...this is so amazingly beautiful! Your words flow so beautifully together....they touched my heart...best of luck to you...smiles, Terry
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Thank You for writing this with me, my dearest Wendy.
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Thank YOU! It was my very first
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this was a beautiful collab
and you worked beautifully together
it was full of emotion and it seems to show that it can happen to anyone
well done and best of luck
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