While I cry, perhaps out of fear,
you tilt my head, and whisper in my ear:
"I want you to remember, when I touch you like this,
how much I love you, and how it's you that I miss."
I touch that place, on the side of my throat,
and think, maybe pray, I daresay hope,
that things will work themselves out for the good,
and we'll be together in hearts, as I know we should.
This love, such as ours, is more than it seems,
as it seems to me, I met you in a dream.
Dreaming of the perfect, for him to live,
and give all the love there is to give,
just as you do, for always, as you say,
how you love me more, with each passing day.
These words genuine, I see it in your eyes,
the first time I can see eyes without lies.
You know the most unique this love seems?
is that we are still just in our teens.
Author notes
[♥]option one [♥] Write About True Distinct Love [[meaning nothing like everyday love. why is this different from it, this option will be hard]]
A contest entry
- You Must Come In To Find Out =P but i will give you a hint options by Ignis Corpus.
425 points, ended September 10, 2007, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Marvelous
This is a great poem, and the thoughts and moods were very much portrayed. You seem like a great writer. Nice job. -
good poem you made me think of me and someone else though true love doesnt ever lie though. but hrm i guess it could in a way, over all good job the structure of the poem could be worked on some more. other than that i belibed this was good. keep up the work and i wish you the best of luck in this contest
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