In a land of make believe,
I think of you,
and wait…
Where flowers are forever blooming
and the sunset is always present,
causing dreams to walk along
a path of beauty and passion,
lit with a love that has no end
Where two can look beyond friendship
and see there is more,
both desiring the same thing
at the same moment,
past fears and doubts
In a land of make believe,
I think of you,
and wait…
for my dreams to be truth.
Author notes
picture inspired
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Contest by R-Evolve.
1500 points, ended September 11, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful place to be....
Congratulations on a gold with this one! That's a land of make-believe that anyone would like to wake up to, I think!
Knight70
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A beautiful written piece and well deserving of the Gold.
It said so much about the power of love and how it can change things around, from friendship to love.
Congratulations.
Soulful Woman
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thank you SO much...
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Your topic at first is present edgy-ish cliche-ish. But thats fine, because there was a beautiful underlying tone to the whole poem. Nice job. Keep up the great work
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you know me and cliche-ish... glad you enjoyed the underlying tone..
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oh come on, geez most of the time you're very un-cliche-ish
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Beautifully penned! I like the lead in...really hooks the reader.
Must admit it reminded me of being a dreamy-eyed, pre-teen drooling over some rock star, or actor in a teeny magazine.lol...must've had something to do with make believe. Your words are really quite lovely.
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thank you for your comment. it made me laugh since that was not at all the reason this was written. i appreciate you stopping by to read, as always.
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This is very good. Where two can look beyond friendship and see there is more. Finally realizing how to make your dream truth. Those were words that touched my heart.
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i really like this one... the title dragged me in right away... and its nice to see you made it a kind of motiff.. cuz i like it..
cant tell if this is sad or happy... i took it as sad at first... but i could see someone taking it another way.. mabye im just predisposed to the sadness... lol
another one full of great imagery.
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are you trying to cheer me up by commenting on my poems?
and this was written before the one you had just commented on, so it isn't as sad... just... thoughts... i guess...
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hey, i live there!!! lol, this was a beautiful poem, and it really hit home. thats seriously my life...awesome job...
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wow... you do???? i need to live where you live!
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that land is always nice... but...
seriously... you would want SOME sun every now and then RIGHT?!?! lol
good poem
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haha.... of course... nothing is better than a sunny day.
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this poem is so very easy to relate to for me, i feel pretty much the same way right now. wonderful poem, like, this is most definatly wow worthy =) great job!!!!!!!
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thanks, kev.
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