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Beautiful

the tears fell dont your face, beautiful.
we didnt know what to do
the sadness in you eyes told me
it was over...
we parted our own ways.
friends no more
lovers never to be again, beautiful.
anger no long controled
hunny, the fighting is to much
my caing got in the way
let me wip your tears away one more time
my feelings are no longer for you
beautiful, im sorry for loving you
no more talking
no more lies
no more fighting
no more wounds from you to me
rain drops go down my cheek
to meet the cold
beautiful, we have to say good bye

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it hurt to say good-bye........ but no more talking means no more fighting right?

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  • Yahiko
    August 28, 2007

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    very true friend very true.... it almost makes me cry because I had to do something like this and I'm still trying to get through it... but we all move on eventually good write though


  • Abv. 01101001
    August 28, 2007
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    I went through something like this before. maybe not the exact thing...but something like it.
    Saying goodbye seems to be for the better. but when you actually get to saying it, your body and lips are hesitant to go into action. it hurts a lot...
    even if it has to be done.
    good write.


    • DancingRain1692
      August 28, 2007
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      yeah

      all him and me did was..... fight after i dumped him..... so yesterday i told him we cant be friends unless he gets over the fact that i dumped him


      • Abv. 01101001
        August 28, 2007
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        Thats good i guess..
        Kind of a harsh way to put it,
        but at least it might get something done.