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Show Me

Show Me
your true feelings
your love for me
that you care

show me
someone cares about a nobody
someone can be wonderful in this scary world
that i am right


Show me
i have a face
I  have a voice
I can be somebody

but most of all
i want you to show me
that even through of this
you still care

a broken heart
cant hide its pain

but you can show me
the way to get over it

please show me
the way to happiness
the way
to find the light in the dark

show me
thats there is more to life
and not the pain
and i'll thank you

 

show me

the meaning to life

and the secret of happiness

a nudge of the  head if you care 

 

show me
that you care
and there is more to life
and im not alone

Show Me...

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Kinda true for a person

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  • Kuranya gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    I would love for this very thing also, some people can be so cold and do not realise the other has feeling which don't care to be walked upon.... I applaud you for all these great pieces

    Karen


  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    August 30, 2007
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    !!!
    Excelent!!
    Great Job!


  • Raining
    August 28, 2007

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    a broken heart
    cant hide its pain
    but you can show me
    the way to get over it

    ether you did that on prpose or should fix it. ANYWAY... Love your poem!!

    Show me
    i have a face
    I have a voice
    I can be somebody

    thats my fravorite stanza!
    Keep up the good work!

    ~evilsss