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Last Straw

Too stupid to realize

Or fully aware of consequence

I cannot answer this

You can, but where are you?

I'll never know

You're not a part of my circle

Yet I listened to you quite often

The words you spoke captivated me

Now that's all I have left

Always one to read between the lines

I could hear your pain

Very dark, very real

Just couldn't experience the ride

You kept falling down that hole

Guess you finally hit the bottom

You cut your shoelaces for the last time

New words I'll never find

You tried to get away many times

Finally they caught you

Goodbye

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  • Susan John Francis
    August 29, 2007
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    Hi thanks i guess some ideas are connecting ...........coool
    Susan J.Francis


    • Rothman
      August 29, 2007
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      Absolutely!!!


      • Susan John Francis
        August 29, 2007
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        But i cannot say good bye ..... its that feeling which pushes me to write i agree it hurts loads but then it keeps me going i GUESS?????????


  • Sedasia
    August 28, 2007
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    wow

    This pierces my soul for some reason.. someone might feel this way about me.. not sure.


    • Rothman
      August 28, 2007
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      Thank you very much

      This poem I wrote after someone who "pierced my soul" with their lyrics lost a battle to addiction.

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