the little things he does to me
they set my heart on fire.
His sweet soft lips upon mine
raise the deepest of desire.
My heart beats fast
Butterflies grow restless.
my knees grow weak.
I'm totally breathless.
We've grown with time
and only to find.
we're more in love
then words can define.
Author notes
Derek aka my high school sweatheart wanted me to write a poem about him ( it makes him happy) lol....so I did this in like 5min...it's simple and to the point
A contest entry
- "make my heart swell" by second-born.
600 points, ended September 9, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrites Contest by wolfcub.
800 points, ended September 12, 2007, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I'm guessing this romance is still alive? Really passionate, and really sweet!
Thankyou for entering and good luck in my contest.
Katie -
wow...the simplicity and sincerity of your words definitely put a smile in my heart...you're so in love...and that's so true in your poem...
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haha i loved it sweetie,
great wright i know he lots too, great wright keep it up love bunches..xoxox
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