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lost in this stare

I'm in love,
many might be jealous....
or admirer, one who has found each other....
Never thought love would be a true desirer.....
But my heart wants to be filled, and trust me it is....
Im just tired of fighting this test in life,
Need to let go and treat me like an equal...
I sit here thinking of these thoughts,
while being lost in this stare.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
    September 18, 2007

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    Lost in this stare... what an awesome title and ending! Been there! Love and hugs, Amanda!


  • Bataran
    August 28, 2007
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    short and precise. good one. i can realy relate to the feeling