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torn

i dont know how you do it but you do. youve got that special thing that winds me right up. the anger and pain you make me feel is nothing compared to the love and happiness i have with you. you are my weakness. i cannot deny the love i have for you but neither can i deny the hate. deciding what feeling is stronger is tearing me apart. i'm split in two. one side of me rages at you feels the hatred i have towards you. the other has a passion for you, that obsession that cant let go. i need you and want you. but also cant stand you. your the little part that stays in my thoughts good or bad. im torn. i dont know whether to love or hate you!

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  • Badass Brea
    November 2, 2007

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    It's as though you plucked these words out of my mind, especially the "you are my weakness" I have been with my boy Steven for over 3 years now, and he is my weakness.


  • rachel xxo
    November 1, 2007
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    good poem i feel your pain

    wen u wrote this i think u were in a simular position as i am in now and have been for quite a long time now. i hate this guy but i love him to and hes forcing me to dump my new boyfriends even though he doesnt tlk to me anymore and i never went out with him.
    rachy xx

  • Rockwell
    October 12, 2007
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    nice one. i know that feeling, and you did a good job of conveying it. thumbs up


  • Walking Tall
    August 29, 2007

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    sucky dilema,,,, hope it works out
    and you manage to resolve ur inner conflict
    good write again
    SeeJ