When the breeze moves too slow
Leaving a rustle on the leaves,
A shimmer from the horizon low,
Almost touching the seas..
As the waters sparkle with the glow
Like lovers bonding with ease,
To silence, the night makes her bow ~
That treasured moment, we try to seize
While, in your eyes, I seek the truth I know,
That precious secret which hold the keys
To my heart, where resplendence grow..
We lock ourselves as time just flees
Endless talks, into the night, they go
Moments ~ which memories freeze,
To the ambrosial moon, we owe..
As the waters gleam, the skies they'd please
The lustrous nature, on elegant show,
And that time, we'd steal to our hearts' appease,
Secured to stay in the years that flow..
Those dulcet whispers, in tune with the breeze
Becomes a song, the moon gleams bestow;
Our aimless stroll, 'midst the swaying trees
~ a lucid dance, 'neath the full moon's glow;
And nature sighs, as the breeze moves slow
Leaving a rustle on the leaves,
A shimmer from the horizon low,
Almost touching the seas..
As the waters sparkle with the glow
Like lovers bonding with ease..
In a list
A contest entry
- Rhyme Only by piccola.
900 points, ended August 30, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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raspberry now how have i failed to read and comment on this one? guess old age is slowing me down. It is easy to see how this one gained its rightful place on the top most step of the podium Excellent Great rhyme format kind of double mono rhyme Great work A joy to read
Congratulations once again
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Thankyou Legend, I am much honored to receive a comment fro myou
they always cheer me.. thanks again.. I am a fan of your rhymes though.
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I fell in love after just reading the first stanza. This is wonderful and you are very talented. Thank you for entering my humble contest.
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Thankyou for the wonderful comment Yess.. I loved the first stanza too.. thanks a ton again for your words.. and for the GOLD as well...
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What a nice and tender verses of love my dear friend. The last stanza is simply breathtaking. this poem is shining from your site. Perfect!
~Sonja~
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Thankyou Sonja.. Hope ur doing good..
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I am ok my dear friend. Mostly working and from time to time taking a rest.
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