put your arms
in my hands
you will be safe here..
if nobody will understand you,
i will believe..
here in my arms,
sleep tight to a long cold night..
i will put my heart
in your hands..
so you will be safe
from here..
A contest entry
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360 points, ended August 29, 2007, 8 entries
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emotions without complexity just a message straight form the heart...you words gives this certain courage to someone who's feeling weak
well penned Kabayan
Anna Lee
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woah... I really like this. It's strong. The vagueness adds to it, definitely. You're a great poet, daddio! ^_^ I miss talkin' to ya.
-Your Lily [precious]♥
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its a very good poem .......u might be wondering who this
is but u dont even come on but yea its me irene
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great motion
wonderful. great defination and a very warm poem write story envoking so much with some very well chosen words
'also was reading this with my gf and she blown away.
awesome well placed wonder!
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simple and right to the point, very creative as well im not sure of the subject that created this piece but it truly flows with emotion, great work
Temple~
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wow! this is really good!
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oh this is to just simply beautiful thankyou good luck
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