Proud wings fly no more
Dying limbs imprison soul
This cage is not me
Author notes
Option 3
A contest entry
- 50 Titles to Choose From, All Sorts of Ideas, Give it A Go by abba12.
600 points, ended August 29, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - GIVE ME YOUR HM FOR A CHANCETO WIN GOLD by esroddo.
450 points, ended September 21, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Upgrade your Honorable Mention to Gold Silver or Bronze (contest by sinnastarr) by Sinnastarr.
700 points, ended November 5, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PW parade by birch.
300 points, ended October 26, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like this ~ its beautiful, its simple yet its so profound. It's not sad though. It stains the heart with beauty and wings, but I don't feel the emotions.
Thanks for entering.
Much luck
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it's short. but sooooo spiritual. I like it. keep it up.
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Wonderful Haiku! I have only attempted a couple and they were no where as good as this! Best of luck in the contest!
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i think that this is the most message i have probably ever seen in a haiku. i am impressed by that. dusty
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 haiku, or "true haiku" as I like to call it as there are now so many variations. Your poem not only fit the rules of a Haiku, but was very poetic. I read a lot of haiku's here that arn't.
I see why this poem won an "HM" trophy.
Well done.
Thank you so much for entering my contest and I wish you the best of luck.
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Wow powerful and yet simply beautiful write. Thanks for entering
LISA
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this shows that a lot of words are not needed
to get a great point across,
and that is something most
poets keep forgetting
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simple, but it has feeling to it, it shows something. I really like it, what emotions and life have been put into those 14 words. Well done, thanks for entering!
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