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Insomnia

Twilight fell
On a sleepless face
Looking up
Eyes peering into space
Blue green eyes
Meeting a dark red sky
Cold night air wafts in

She says:

"Sleep will come
When to Morpheus you succumb"
With cheek bones set
and lips pressed against
A clove cigarette
Smoke neatly condensed
In the cold night air



Let sleep take hold
Sweet dreamers
And the sweet midnight cold
Will sweep you away tonight

A wry grin
Spreads across
her ivory skin
And she says

"He's like a lover
Who never calls you back"






Author notes

Cant sleep....


Full of depressants.....drank sleeping tea....
My heart is beating to fast....Bah

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  • MxOrpheus
    August 28, 2007

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    Love it. Perfect reference to Morpheus...and I love your final line. Goshhh....Been too long. Write moreeeee so I can shower you in points! <3