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Drawn to you

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I am drawn to you, as I have been many lifetimes
Our love has been transported from another place and time
I feel  you always,

 

     in my thoughts,

                       in my soul,
                                    in my heart

 

Our love is powerful and crosses many realms
With each crossing, it becomes more infinite

 

You are a part of me, always have been, always will be
I cannot think of love without thinking of  you
For you are the personification of love
All that I have ever wanted to be,
I become in your presence

 

 

 

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I am drawn to you like a moth to the flame...Unknown

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  • esroddo silver member
    September 19, 2007
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    Very impressive write

    Wow a beautiful write with such passion and love. I loved these lines thanks for your entery, LISA
    "You are a part of me, always have been, always will be
    I cannot think of love without thinking of you
    For you are the personification of love
    All that I have ever wanted to be,
    I become in your presence"





  • Swangrnv gold member
    September 12, 2007
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    and like a moth...

    ...to the flame I was burned by the fire! this feels deeply romantic!good piece.


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    September 10, 2007

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    woowwww...I know how this feels....You captured my feelings inside your mind and poem.

    "I am drawn to you, as I have been many lifetimes
    Our love has been transported from another place and time
    I feel you always"


    I really loved the soft loving mood it brought...Lovely...
    XXJeannette


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 9, 2007

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    For you are the personification of love
    All that I have ever wanted to be,
    I become in your presence


    These words are truly the beats of your heart..and I can hear these love beats..thanks for the magical entry in my contest..


  • GoodKnightPoet
    September 7, 2007

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    This is a great poem. I really like the phrase "I cannot think of love without thinking of you." and "For you are the personification of love." What more can be said?


  • Uniquely-Scarred
    September 5, 2007

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    wonderful very beautiful write differs from some of the love poetry i have read which is a good thing i like the lay out and the words in the middle.. yeah i enjoyed this it was a pleassure to read


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 4, 2007

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    Wow,

    This hit the spot, how I adore pieces of love that flow forth in such beauty as you express here in your wonderfully inscribed poetry! This is amazing, and so care free to read. Much love and light!


    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • Whoochi gold member
    September 3, 2007

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    Love the feel of this..definitely drawn in with your of longing, love and loyalty..THAT is the way true love should be, right? Making you be the best person you can be..I have heard you say this before when we have chatted...YOU ARE the BEST..love ya, good luck!


  • poetryality silver member
    September 3, 2007

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    Love is indeed magnetic. I understand these words and relate wholeheartedly. There is a calm to these words making it quite understandable why this person makes you feel so free. Very finely crafted my sister. Excellent! I wish you well in the challenge.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    September 2, 2007

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    Your words do flow so gentle and the emotions stir the mind...you have penned a master piece my sister and I really enjoyed Thank you so very much and good-luck

  • Liquid memories
    August 31, 2007
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    sweet caring words thatwarm the heart,

  • deleteit
    August 29, 2007
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    Oh I do love what this speaks from the prompt! You bring together love in the most beautiful of aspects. One that is not casted away in cliche' or materialistic values that this world offers. Detailed in pure and the most tender of ways. Fantastic work of art. Good luck in the contest


  • rhondasail
    August 28, 2007

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    Succinct, and so delicately lovely a write...your perspective on the prompt takes that small unnoticed word and expands it...'like a moth to THE flame'...beautifully expressed and I believe it is trophy worthy...but, I am not the judge...Good luck with this one...Peace, Rhonda


  • Mykeee
    August 28, 2007

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    great picture to set the mood. Love the spirtual essence of this. Life and love connecting from the furthest reaches of the universe. ~ great feeling to this. ~ Mykey


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    August 28, 2007

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    this was beautiful hunnie and really inspirational
    it was a wonderful take on the prompt
    this was just beautiful
    well done and best of luck


  • tawk gold member
    August 28, 2007

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    Wow I can so relate to your write. Just beautiful and inspirational. Wonderful imagery and emotions. Good luck in the contest


  • Amera gold member
    August 28, 2007

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    Oh my! You did a wonderful job with this prompt. I love it! I usually don't like unconventional structure but it works perfect here and enhances the read. Very well done!

    Love,
    Amera ♥

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