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Two Worlds Collide

I've hungered for the feelings given
and thirst to sip from your desires.
A course charted in the stars,
ignites the spark, to feed these fires.

So close, yet eons away, I hear
whispers that cross time and space.
Soft breezes bring cosmic highs,
where my heart, they softly trace.

What beats inside, can't be denied,
longing for when, two worlds collide.

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    August 28, 2007

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    Holy moly this is great. Very deserving of the Silver. You have expressed so much in so few words, but it still packs an impact. Congratulations.

    Jeannie


    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      August 28, 2007
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      Thank you Jeannie, appreciate it.
      Just something that comes from deep down within.

      Storm

  • darkwitch
    August 28, 2007

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    This is a great poem, and I love how you added in the love you feel for another into it. This is a wonderful take on the picture.

    DW

  • sunflowerpoet
    August 28, 2007

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    Beautifully written, I particularly loved the second stanza, "So close, yet eons away, I hear
    whispers that cross time and space.
    Soft breezes bring cosmic highs,
    where my heart, they softly trace." Neat job!
    Hugz,
    Sunflower.