In a dream I'm on a cloud,
The stars around me dance,
I'm laying down in your arms,
lost in a deep sweet trance.
Your trying to get me to fall asleep,
By singing my lullaby,
But my eyes can never droop, with you by my side.
In my mind-my trance like state,
I'm thinking thoughts of you
Memories of you just being there
Allow my heart to soar,
You smile, your eyes lighting,
As your think of something more.
Now woken from my trance-like state,
I remember that I'm not asleep,
I'm on my cloud your here with me,
On cloud nine, your all I see.
Please tell me what you think
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well first of all stupid frickn contest!!!!!!! ended befor we joined!! it was not soposed 2! ass hole person grr. now that im done ranting.. gee we shouldn'n have used names so close lol im cloud nine and your my cloud nine although I sugested your name and came up with my own it was like 2 am lol this did not work out as when we did the seven deadly sins one that rocked! hehe.. well now down to your poem! it's so pretty im just glad it wasn't as gushy as mine yuck! good job sam!
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