The Fall
I look down and glimpse.
Is this really safe?
What are my chances of survival?
The bridge sways back and forth.
I get nervous and anxious.
No one can stop me now.
No one can stop the fall.
I just can’t take this all.
I take a hard glance.
There won’t be a second chance.
I step up on the rail.
I cannot fail
I go to change my mind.
There may be another way to unwind.
I slip on the bridge wall.
And then I fall.
The people cheer.
As I conquer my fear.
I can feel my throat clump,
As I bungee jump.
Author notes
Hey Everyone. I've already had this poem published into a book and decided to add it on here. KayDee(username: XDiamondxStuddedx), who is my best friend, has already posted this poem on her account and encouraged me to join so this poem is the first one I've decided to add onto my account. Hope you enjoy! I might add some other poems that were "KayDee and Antonio productions" as she calls it! Enjoy!
Please tell me what you think
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awesome, yes i see "SHOCKER" lol
great job, i just lovd it and the antici[pation... =]
publisher...brag
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Theres another poem I want to get published in a book before I put it on here... It's good
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pshshshshhshs
no need to brag there mister, i didn't say i haven't been published
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I'm 17 I act a bit younger than my age I know (sorry for bragging btw) so how much have you got published? Me only two lmfao
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well right now i'm 15, turn 16 in december, i've had one poem published, and one short story so hahah i suxx, lol
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oo a short story
lol Short stories are good... i have a 6 part poem i wrote on here that shouldn't be called poems because they're so long! lmao... They are practically short stories... first one with no rhyme scheme the last 5 have a rhyme scheme in most spots... I made someone cry because they're sad (well most are sad ) I love playing with people's emotions!
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hahahahha shouldn't we start messaging lol, instead of using comments
you made someone cry..weird, me too, and i felt awful i was like damn and then i had to cheer them up but like yeah..... ( i like playing iwth peoples emotions too, just not my friends or i try not to )
, lol
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Nice one. Had me wondering for a minute there, definaltely had my attention.
Well done.
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yay xD i wanted that type of effect
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