Modest jean skirt, sexy white shirt,
red high heels, Blondie short cut, long tan legs
big green eyes sweet quiet smile.
loves with all she is,
protects with all she gives,
child held close to breast,
and loved beyond all else.
Time now child has wed
to find more life again.
looking at the world
beyond her door walking
down those steps.
Big green eyes sweet shy smile.
Author notes
Rheea
A contest entry
- CELEBRATION by Olivia33.
300 points, ended December 20, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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green eyes...
Sounds beautiful... time passes but beauty, or at least some types of beauty, remain forever! I love this!
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Very nicely done on this. It was short but it said ALOT, the imagery in this piece was really good. I think anyone could place someone to fit that criteria. Good job on this. Best of luck to you in my contest and thanks so much for entering =]
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Sweet & Lovely!!!
Very nice piece, I like its simplicity...
Thnx for entering & Best of Luck
GloriousGift
Heba -
this is beautiful. i love the simplicity of the line in your descriptions. its clear and there isn't excess ornament; its just this is what she looks like. i think that is probably what makes it the most beautiful. lovely work, dear.
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Very nice......
to me it kind of describes one generation growing up and bringing in another generation all finding love and looking at he world beyond their door!!!Nice job an thanks for sharing!!!~~toni~~
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