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[ All alone ]

All alone
Just how it is
How it will always be
I can feel him
His arms around me
Holding me tight
I知 happiest then
But it all fades away
So quickly

I知 all alone again
Just like always
How it always is
I can hear him
His voice so deep
Resonating in my mind
I知 happiest then
But it will always fade away
Oh so quickly

All alone once again
Just like it should be
How it should be
I can see him
Clearly in my mind
His smile so lasting, a goofy grin of his
I知 happiest then
But it always fades away
So very quickly

Alone once more
Just like before
How I always am
I can smell him
The rich taste of him
It tingles my nose
I知 happiest then
But always it fades
It fades quickly

All alone
Just how it is
How it will be from now till the end
I can taste him
Even though he was never mine
I can taste his flesh, his mouth on mine
I知 truly the happiest then
But it will never stay
It fades so quickly away

I知 alone
I will always be alone
I dare say I love him
Even now
When I see him now, I smile
When I hear him now, I sigh
When I touch him now, I melt
When I smell him now, I close my eyes
I will never taste him again
I will never have him
Save in my mind
And I am happiest there

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Hmmmmm....
I really wish I could get over him....

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  • butterflytears
    August 28, 2007
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    oh honey! it was beautifully written and it brought tears to my eyes...i love you sooo much


  • Dirty and Broken
    August 28, 2007
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    um...who?


    • PerpetualNight
      August 28, 2007
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      I do not wish to divulge this information cause if i dont admit it it will go away.. right??


  • -CrimsonTears-
    August 28, 2007
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    i love this...it was sad but a great poem...i hope you do better...good luck...luv you....xoxoxo


  • wanderingstarlet
    August 28, 2007
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    loverz you mucho, i say good luck and i hope things turn out welll


  • Fixing Tomorrow
    August 28, 2007

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    everytime you say "i'm happiest then" it reminds me of my DI from last year where I was anorexic. lolll.
    BUT seriously now. good poem. i like the repitition. i'm sorry you till want him

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