Goddess Goddess, let me be,
a lover, a madman, to worship thee,
Its full moon night,
A night of mystery,
Why you cannot say to me,
"I am for thee__ I love thee!"
Oh my lovely lady,
O dear Miss Shorthand,
O my wine, my Gold Leaf,
let me love thee sweet,
let me worship thee,
Goddess, I can't hold my words,
my dreams, my red hot tears,
the moon is full out there,
let me kiss thy little hand ,
let me kiss thy lips, so sweet!,
tonight is the night of lovers,
come along with me
come to the lovers street,
come to the fairyland,
Can’t you see the fireflies?
Cant you see them dance?
Can’t you see the moon up there?
lets go hand in hand,
let me have your sorrows fly,
let me wash away your tears,
trust in me and you will see,
the moon the stars the galaxy
the lakes and the butterflies,
in my heart, in my dreams
in here.., in my eyes,
come sweetheart,
live in my eyes,
live in my dreams,
be there in my heart,
trust in me, oh, just in me,
I will give you a treasure,
a moment of love,
a moment of joy,
that thou will forget,
all thy sorrows,
Even forget thyself,
in moonlight …Out there,
give all to love and you will see,
that I am for thee, sinyouree
Goddess,Goddess, I miss thee,
In the Moonlight, Let me be,
A Lover, a Madman, A Bee,
For thee, thee and thee.
Author notes
In full moon nights, I miss my Goddess...
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hi , i have written something in the moonlight let us be , i liked your title hope you don't mind if i get inspired by it.. if you mind i will change the title. ok , read it please and tell me what you think. take care
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hey you dont need to change the title, I am happy that you have choosen a title similar to minethanks, for your beautiful thoughts.this moon is yours , sky is yours, moonlights is also yours, so the beautiful words and thoughts are purely your own.I am honourd with your words that you got inspired by my poem.thank you once again.
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i 've always liked your poetry Ahkam.; you are such a lover , you know how to love , you know what is passion , you are deep.. this is why your words are beautiful because they are coming from your inner so deep. -
Wow this is so passionate, I hadn't read something like it in quite some time! I love the use of "thee, thee and thee", almost like imploring, but not quite, more like enticing? My perception, of course. I don't know who is the Goddess but she sure makes a great muse!
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"I want to do to you what the spring does to the cherry trees..." Who wrote that? You pack passion in these lines, friend.
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i saw the moon, the starts, the galaxy, those butterflies, the lake,fireflies...they were all carefully embedded in your eyes. i saw a dream in your eyes...a dream, a love, a madness....beautifully written ahkam... but why??? why? im no goddess...you love me, i love you, but we are cold and coward?? nice write ahkam...thank you.
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'Goddess', 'sinyouree', 'Miss Shorthand'...so many names...is this one love you have or many?...From the last line here it seems there are at least three..."For thee, thee and thee"...Your words are full of yearning and passion, "live in my eyes, live in my dreams, be there in my heart" and the author note suggests this is a recurring happening...she is/they are very lucky to have someone who cares so deeply...I think the strongest images here for me, there are two...the full moon and all of the tears shed...both of these are clear and present in my mind's eye...well written, Later, AG
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