I am
no more than an illusion,
and nothing less than a shadow.
Despite the ways
I define myself,
Not even I could place
a face on me.
I May just be that little whisper
in the wind,
The one you didn't quite catch.
Maybe the girl that you've forgotten,
The one you remember
but have never seen before.
If possibilities exist,
I could be the last of your soul.
Or I could be nothing at all.
I am
whatever you believe.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration #4 [re-open for LovinCharmer] by Manda Kathryn.
450 points, ended September 3, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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TriggerHappy
I agree with 'a lonely soul' this is a pretty-sad piece.
Beautiful and full of questions and answers
Fabulous
Thank you very much for your entry
Best of luck
Stay safe
~Amanda
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Though it's sad, it's a pretty-sad kind of piece. I guess it's a great piece cause I can understand it very well in relating to it. I think you did a very well done job writing it. Keep up the great work, and good luck in the contest.
Love
~~Tori~~
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