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Lost Voice

I pity the ones who are blind
Their sight they have left
But there’s a worse fate I have mind.
Than not seeing or being deaf

It would never occur
Losing your voice
Never unable to murmur
If I had a choice

I tried to speak
And nothing came out
I couldn’t even whisper
When I wanted to shout

My words I couldn’t feel
But I struggled as hard as I could
My enemies were like steel
And I had only the strength of wood

My lips forgot the moves to make
And they moved without noise
They found they didn’t remember
The dance of my voice

I decided to communicate in writing
My smears became a large blot
Communicating this way should be safer
At least that’s what I thought

My tears dripped onto the paper
Splotching on the sheet
I couldn’t write anything that made sense
My fears I would not meet

I walked many a cold, lonely street
Searching far and wide
I gasped at the pain in my feet
Their blisters I tried to hide

The air would have echoed with my cries
But there wasn’t any noise
I could have soared through the skies
If only I’d found my voice

Suddenly I found it
And left behind my being weary and weak
Luckily I managed to hit
As I lunged for the power to speak

I loudly rejoiced
Annoying everyone around
Until I was hoarse
And my throat unwound

I will never lose again
To anyone who keeps me from my treasure
Now that I have it back
Speaking and singing give me great pleasure

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  • Nostalgia
    November 13, 2007

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    Wow. That was extrodinary, we as humans always underestimate the power of speach, and if we didn't have it many of us would be lost. At least without writing Beautiful, vivid, and capturing write.