The words
Surround my every breath
Choke me, and gag me
I cant see what is right in front
Or maybe I dont want to
Sometimes life can slap you
And fire can be blown back on your tongue
Am I unknown to you
Or do you just chose to see right through me
This bitter sweet facade you have laid out
Its only the road you will be following
And you must follow alone
How does that banner look
Opposed to the star lit sky
A meer image of what you loathe for
Am I realy unknown
To you, and your beer goggled eyes
Forever only last a little while
Kiss me babe
Becasue I am tired of being unknown
The spotlight is on my siloutte
I am no longer an image in your head
I stand strong
Even after you tried to tear me down
Failing miserably is a term you have become accustomed [to]
Hold me my Mr. Nothing
Because without you
I would have never had the couage
To brace
And look at me now
Bathing in your glory
Look at the big picture now
Becasue baby
For once I am known
Author notes
I think it went along with ou wanted...... I tried as best as I could!! I really hope you enjoy it!!!!!!
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration #4 [re-open for LovinCharmer] by Manda Kathryn.
450 points, ended September 3, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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DevinCora
I do like this very much
I enjoy freestyle writes, and this one is great
"I am no longer an image in your head
I stand strong"
I especially liked those lines
Fabulous
Thank you very much for your entry
Best of luck
Stay safe
~Amanda
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~Glistening*With*Allure~
Arrrrrr I love it babyxxxx.......good luck in this contest! Piss on the idiot that doesn't like yo' color BiOTCh!
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I like the line
"I can't see what is right in front
or maybe I don't want to"
And the Mr. Nothing.
Awesome poem, bit hard on the eyes the colours though, just a bit though.
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