I gaze in wonder at such beauty
To behold something so natural
Your eyes shine like the brightest of stars
When you smile I go weak at the knees
I long to hold you delicately in my arms
To caress you all over passionately with my lips
My heart melts with such unbelievable longing
To run my fingers over your silky skin
To whisper words of love into your ear
In my hands I hold a picture
It is all I have of you yet I still dream,
Nature surrounds me but my love for you out shines
We used to talk but now you are gone
Across the seas in a land so far away
My love wasn’t enough to hold you here
It is something I will never understand
To unknown place into the arms of another
I have only my dreams to hold onto now
My memories beginning to fade with time
The pain of separation wasn’t to bad
Compared to the crushing letter
When your words broke my heart
You turned my love into something twisted and unclean
You were only gone for a little while
I thought what we had would be strong enough to overcome
But to find out this way so bitter and mean
What have I ever done to you to turn you so cold?
I guess I will never know why you hate me so
You have smothered my feelings for you so completely
Once I knew how to love but now it is rendered useless
My heart is hardened my feelings have all dried up
My happiness for life so neatly ripped from me
Like a dagger thrown from afar
To send such pain and destruction
With a pen and paper you’ve ruined me
I hope you are happy with your new life
As mine stains the floor liquid coppery red.
By Kindredblood
Author notes
"THORN N PEBBLES ROCK"
This happened in the past, fell in love together for 2 years, then oversea's she went to work, turned out she was working more than the job.
Ah well shit happens and I fell for it.
Um if for some reason this poem fails the rules, then by all means DQ and delete, is all good, got to follow the rules after all.
A contest entry
- [*Broken{♥}&&BleedingArms*] by Logans-Mommy.
600 points, ended September 6, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Just be honest
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This is so filled with feelings that it runs over...at first I was thinking how romantic and loving; then it turned, I guess as love often does...well written
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heart felt
this is a heartfelt write. I like it, I could feel your words...almost hear them even...good write,good luck! -
Again, an amazing write kindred...
I have had my heart broken as well and it took almost a year to get over it. You have captured many of the feelings I remember....good luck with the contest.
hugs Moony
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A beautiful poem. Very well written. She should be tied to a stump out in the middle of a Louisiana swamp. Believe me the mosquitos and the alligators would love her. LOL. The poem is wonderful and heartfelt. Simply beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
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Be Honest Ok I will I wish i knew where she was because i would throw her off the waterfall with my sister in law for hurting you
hehe. In all truths this is an amazing write I wish you luck in the contest xx Best wishes.
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i like the descriptions. especially at the very end about the blood. i liked this piece alot. good luck =-]
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