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porcelain painting,
breathing, listening, loving
with a mortal heart
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Author notes
A
Haiku'
Syllable count is:
5-7-5
A contest entry
- FREE VERSE, OTHER OPTIONS. by AngelicMistress.
1000 points, ended August 27, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is a lovely haiku, with or without the picture. So much it seems is prsentation, yet the words are what count. Liked your idea in your contest with nothing, just words and plain background works for all equally.
This is a wonderful entry in this contest though.
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Beautiful!
A woman whos beauty transcends the canvas.
Very romantic.
~Pastel
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this is a true haiku... so very nicely scribed... you truly are an amazing poet ~
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Nice work again!
Liked what you shared in this lated work Arkbear! I enjoyed the picture that goes along with it. You are wonderful as always! THANKS!!
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Another beautiful Haiku you have penned with your golden pen. Continue the great work and I look forward to reading more.
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My Dearest Uncle,
This is beyond words! I love it!!!!! What a great read this one is!! I love that last line!
Best of luck in this contest!!!!
and much love
Nyetta
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Beautiful! well done. So much said with so little. Just another one to remind me why I love reading your work. Short and sweet. Good luck with the contest.
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Beautifully Penned Haiku
This so much like you have given life to a beautiful piece of cherished art. Perfect syllable count and a deep concept that paints love in each word....You go Bear..............novy
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YOU HAVE DONE A GREAT JOB POET....
THANK YOU FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST, AND GOOD LUCK
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