Whenever I think of you
I get butterflies in my stomach
I giggle for no reason
Whenever you are around
I long to feel your lips
Pressing against mine
To look into your eyes
And see my future
I fell hard
So hard it hurts
And I'm ready to spend the rest of my life
With the only man who can make me blush
A contest entry
- Who Do You Love? (I WARN YOU... IT'S EXTREMELY CHALLENGING!) by Cherokee.
750 points, ended September 15, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
I tried to pick a favorite part, but ... I couldn't. It was so real, very beautiful. Love is one of the most beautiful (but wicked as well) things on earth. Is this about a certain someone?
Another well deserving poem, best wishes in the contest!!
Kelcey
-
I long to feel your lips
Pressing against mine
To look into your eyes
And see my future
These were my favourite lines
This is an amzaing poem! Filled with so much emotion. I really like the fact that this poem is really relatable. This is exactly how i am feeling at the moment.
Well Done!
x
-
Adding your comment:
