Without you
I would be wrists slit and bleeding
A soul lost and admitting defeat
Selling flesh on dark streets
Without you
I would be inhaling heavy packed earth
Never tasting life's worth
Underneath a cold tombstone
Without you
I would be depression's poster child
Clinging to sanity
Victim of a pedophile
Without you
Dear notes of serenity
Lyrics of strength and delight
I would've given up long ago, without a fight....
Author notes
'music+me'...Music Saved My Life
A contest entry
- Music+ Me= Life by JustHolly.
500 points, ended October 26, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Who or what do you love?...I am Paying It Forward by pearl-dragon.
525 points, ended September 9, 2007, 12 entries
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Comments
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Wow..This is adorable, depressing, yet very meaningful. Love it!
Good luck in the contest! -
Thank you for entering my contest. Your final four lines brought a ray of hope to a sad write.
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Nice
I really enjoyed this poem Favortie line 'I would've given up long ago, without a fight.'
Really enjoyed thanks for reading all the rules!! Or the important ones anyways...
I wish you luck in the contest!
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Thank you!!
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