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Song- The God Device

  To the hands of our Creator
debt repaid in sacrifice,
Hail Great Annihilater!
Lord of virtue,Lord of Vice

Is is widom, is it fate
or are we slave to our device?
Search the skies for higher powers
can he really hear our cries?

Churches built on bones of faithful
Lies beheld of paradise
Papal promises of later
Souls as sold to men and mice


Holy Father,
know what I have done
Earth my Mother,
bury thy son

To the hands of our Creator,
debt repaid in sacrifice
Hail Great Annihilator!
Lord of virtue, Lord of Vice.

Is it wisdom, is it fate
or are we slaves to our device?
Search the skies for higher powers,
Can he really hear our cries?

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  • Swan song gold member
    August 29, 2007
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    Great take on the prompt for the contest very good poem it is well compoased


  • Danneh
    August 27, 2007

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    Stilly child,
    stop calling to a thing that doesn' exist.

    Anyway, this was a really.. chilling write, and too true in my opinion.

    Great job

    -Danneh