There's a glitch in my tech
Sifting through this itch i've revealed that painful twitch
My fingers are all over it
Son of a....nah not permitted
Four languages are committed
Foul language is prohibited
Submitted the rarest gift to kids
Teaching techniques that will last life times I believe I did
Frown at writes that were wrong
Make them right
Hold on...
This glitch is starting to interfere with the fears around me
I can not afford to form tears around me
Where these fallen cares surround me
My heart cringes because of the severe, this grounds me
This tech is not the machine that makes rapid loud sounds
Instead this is the tech that keeps your soul to the ground
Behold, the truth has been found
My scribes as youths were once sound
Input: new batteries, output: new rounds
Believe it or not, the glitch is fading
Breath in a lot your learning is aging
The encouragement ancient, burning, staging
Fixed now, glitch free zone
The problems withered at the foot of your home
That glitch in that tech was a test i've overthrown
Author notes
What moves you can move many. What will you do to move those behind you?
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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superb!
applauded i am that i didn't leave a comment last time i read this!... outstanding piece, loved it from start to fin.!
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hey i never thank you for your comments...thank you...lol...and oh yeah, thanks for the lastest suggestion!
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Outstanding youngster...
Wow! You have outdone yourself kid. This write is fresh, relevant and thought-provoking. I was at the edge of my seat and it kept me off-balance (so I nearly fell over...lol). I'm telling you, I really enjoyed this piece! It inspires me...funny enough, your author notes could have been a part of this poem. That too, was powerful. Where did you come up with this material? Oh yeah, I remember now. This line is a killer, "My fingers are all over it
Son of a....nah not permitted
Four languages are committed
Foul language is prohibited". And I love this part,
"Believe it or not, the glitch is fading
Breath in a lot your learning is aging
The encouragement ancient, burning, staging
Fixed now, glitch free zone"...yup, this is 'top-shelf' work. Thanks for posting it. Keep it up.
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i felt this one...so i decided to go a bit bizzzzzzerk on this piece. i'm glad you enjoyed it!
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